Carolyn McMurray
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π Here's what Bumble should have done instead......(and yes I KNOW it's been a hot minute since the fumble came outta the bag but ya girl's been busy).ANYWAY.In May, Word Tonic set members a lil copywriting challenge; a challenge to rewrite the wrongs in that failed campaign and do something different. And while there were a tonne of amazing entries, these four were the winning lot (PS. It's in order).Holly Pittaway π (winning entry; first two ads)Jenna MacFarlane (winning entry; the third ad)Kendra Dean (runner up; fourth ad)Olivia Wright (runner up; fifth ad)PSSSSSST.In case you were wondering, Word Tonic is an online community built by GEN-Z copywriters FOR GEN-Z copywriters all over the world. If you join, you get access to resources that will help you level up in your career AND ACTUALLY BE PART OF A SPACE OF PPL YOUR OWN AGE, DOING THE SAME CAREER AS YOU π β¨ So if you want copy masterclasses with brands like Tinder, briefs and challenges - with prizes - to test your creativity, AI workshops + more, then find out more about our lovely lot here + join us for a first month discounted TRIAL: https://lnkd.in/d79wGUAv#WordTonic #Copywriting #FreelanceCopywriting #Bumble #Dating #JuniorCopywriter #Advertising #Marketing
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Andy Plume
Creative Director, Director, Writer, Art Director, Screenwriter.
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Like the headline, knocking the competitor, but the tag line 'Download Bumble to meet your match' is promoting another competitor.
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Dimitri Michels
Freelance Senior Copywriter / Copy Lead (English and Dutch)
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Iβd argue you could do without using italics in the first two ads.
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Marcos Angelides
Managing Director at Spark Foundry | LinkedIn Top Voice in advertising, AI, digital marketing and executive management
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'The ball is in your court', is such a great approach. You could build a entire campaign around that single insight.
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Visha Kudhail
Marketing & Business Leader | Board Advisor | Podcaster I Speaker. Formerly Pinterest, Google, YouTube, Thinkbox. Co-Founder of FUTURES Network. 2021 BIMA Champion of Change. Global WiM 2022 Best Leader in Marketing
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I LOVE THIS!!!
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Lauren Storey
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These are wicked, they did such a great job rewriting the ad!π₯
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Daria Paterek
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Such an improvement from the original!
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Vikki Ross
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Daniel de la Cruz
Polymensa: Training for managers at agencies
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Love this!
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Rifa Thorpe-Tracey π
Winner!π I coach #womenintech, digital & creative industries so that we can thrive & change the world ππΎLetβs get out of overwhelm and into success π
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Such talent
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Claudia Wasielewska
On the hunt for a copywriter job, but I'm all pens and no spears...
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Love these headlines.
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